Focus group feedback

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

 General feedback:

Good colour, scheme including effective use of colour matching throughout the create house style.

• Nice pictures which are clear and conventional to my genre in my use of clothing, makeup and outdoor setting.
• Not cluttered and good use of space
• Generally eyecatching and professional looking.
• The model looks great, I love all of her clothes and makeup!
• The general style look really good, i like all of the fonts, colours and pictures
• All of the features look great i want to read it"

• Could make better use of space on contents page. The space below 'Contents' look unusual
• The 'Lily Temple' feature box on the front cover covers the artists face and distracts from her
• The writing on the right half of the DPS is unreadable